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English Composition 101: Critical Feedback
At the very least, the first part of a sentence should bear some vague relation to that which follows.
“The LDP views the use of native English speakers as vital to improving English-speaking ability at a time when it is moving toward making a passing score on the Test of English as a Foreign Language mandatory for entering and graduating from college.”