(May 2013)
Tone and style are perhaps the most
important aspects of any work of literature written primarily to be enjoyed.
They can make it fly or kill it stone dead. They are also the most hard to
define aspects, the most subjective, the most personal. I think that while it
is sometimes possible to definitively say, ‘This is good writing,’ or, ‘This is
bad,’ in the majority of instances it all hinges around personal taste.
But what (hopefully) works in short doses
on a blog is hard to stretch over an entire novel, for all that this one barely
manages to scrape into a double century of pages. It’s not helped by the fact
that Paul, our narrator and protagonist, is a bit of a dick. A misanthropic dick, at that.
It’s the zombie apocalypse, basically,
except that instead of a spreading plague of the undead you get animalistic
hordes of the very, very tired. No-one in the world can sleep, and things go to
shit faster than Red Bull’s profit margin. A few people are able to get a
decent night’s kip though, of whom Paul is one, and he leads us through another
fairly standard ‘fall of civilization’ narrative. He’s a poor choice for a
leading man, to be honest. He doesn’t really care about other people and tells us
as much several times. Even his long-term girlfriend’s rapid decline seems
oddly unaffecting, like he really doesn’t give much of a shit either way as she
and the world around them fall to pieces.
And if the central character doesn’t seem
to care, why should the reader? Fifty pages is generally the point at which I’ll
lose patience with a book. However, because this book is so short fifty
pages represents a quarter of the way, and if you’ve come that far it’s not so much of a
commitment to finish it off. If this had been longer I think I’d have given up on
it entirely; as I said, when the style hit the spot it really worked for me but too often it simply didn’t. By page 90 something resembling a plot is threatening to occur, but it’s a
threat that’s quickly averted and towards the end you find yourself looking
back at the prologue and realizing that all the intervening chapters have
moved the story on not a jot.
I’m also pretty sure that aircraft carriers
and destroyers are different types of warship and that neither carry nuclear
missiles. And I know full well that it wasn’t Samuel L. Jackson’s character who
threatened to “get medieval on your ass” in Pulp
Fiction. I guess I can forgive that though because, as with zombie apocalypse stories, they all look the same, don’t they?
" If I ever had to spend time with a clone of myself I suspect I’d piss myself off royally."
ReplyDeleteThis sounds like the failed experiment known as my second marriage...
Well, looks like you got a fairly reliable punchline out if it, if nothing else ;)
DeleteGirl at bottom right of cover. That's the shit that gives kids nightmares...adults sometimes too.
ReplyDeleteSeems like a proxy zombie/sheeple war is already under way sans the clinical diagnosis and bad make-up.
Too right about the nightmares. In real life the book's bigger and you're closer so it's harder to pick out the patterns. It really does just looks like a lot of smoke. I thought it was merely a fairly poor cover for a fairly poor book. It wasn't until I was putting this post together that I realised there were faces in it, and fists, and skulls, and they'd been staring at me the whole time. Not a little freaky, I'll willingly admit.
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