(March 2014)
“What shall we put the cover?”
“Weapons?”
“Yeah. Big ones. Really big ones. Make sure
they loom.”
“Loom?”
“Loom. Massive fuck off looming fucking
guns. And maybe one little one. And a chair.”
Although in fairness it’s all completely relevant
to the story, and the more recent edition is a little more tastefully done.
That story is, you’ll be pleased to hear, far more subtly and delicately drawn.
It’s very, very good indeed, though on rereading I found that I could recall
almost nothing about it and I can’t decide how to interpret that. Great
literature should stick in the mind, I think, so it kind of falls down on that.
On the upside, it did mean like this was
reading it for the first time, and that’s not to be sneezed at. A warrior for
hire tempted out of retirement for one last mission and, as we’re finding with
the Culture, reiterating the fact that one of the central conundrums with a utopia
is just how far it’s necessary to push yourself in order to find meaning, and
as ever we find that meaning on the fringes. This one carries more weight
though as it’s a far more personal quest, and for all that the structure is
very cleverly done (two alternating plot strands, one moving forward, the other
reversing through the chronology) it’s that individual drive for meaning and
redemption that really propells this book.
As ever I shall pause here to link to two
far smarter and wiser people’s thoughts on this book, one with spoilers, one
without, and also use this as a point to say I’ll be straying slightly into
spoiler territory from here on in.
Because there’s a twist, you see. A big old
twisty twist of the sort that shoved Banks to stardom in his very first novel
whereby the person you’ve just spent the last five hours of your life with
turns out not to be that person at all. I’d remembered that much, at least, and
that does make rereading it a slightly different experience. I pegged the Twist
(note the portentous capping up) to The Sixth Sense before I even saw it, and
if you think claiming that here makes be sound like an insufferable know-it-all
then imagine how my then girlfriend felt, having to sit through the entire
movie with me saying stuff like, “Look, she’s not talking to him,” or “See?
See! No one is making eye contact with him because THEY CAN’T SEE HIM.”
That is, for better or worse (mainly worse,
let’s be honest) the kind of narrative nitpicking in which I like to indulge,
and so going back through Use of Weapons was an exercise in seeing the
occasions when names were dropped and the protagonist is only referred to as “he”,
or the wonderfully ambiguous sentence towards the end of the penultimate proper
chapter claiming that either Elethiomel’s break out or the surgeons battling to
save Zakalwe’s life “almost succeeded”. While this is clearly down largely to
the introverted five-year-old remnants of my psyche – the parts that would
still rather spend a sunny afternoon inside taking apart a music-box to see how
it works rather than play outside with the other children my mother continues
to insist are my ‘friends’ – I’m not sure the book itself doesn’t bear at least
part of the blame. If you’re going to get clever-clever with the structure than
you’re going to attract a certain type of reader and encourage them to get
clever-clever themselves. If you’re going to knit together so many fragments
then that’s just going to encourage some people to pick at the seams. Perhaps.
But of course Banks never drops the ball.
Specificity and narrative vagueness are expertly deployed and the misdirection
is expertly achieved. Except for the fact that in the final analysis, the big
reveal doesn’t quite ring true, at least for me, emotionally. Sure the intellectual,
game playing (ha!) parts of me can understand and appreciate how the trick was
performed – all the boxes get ticked for character motivation and plot
development – but somehow it all feels like just that: a box ticking exercise. Somehow,
somehow, the emotions just don’t quite line up and that, I am fully prepared to
concede, may be entirely down to me.
Yes, Staberinde. Great name for a battleship!
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Isn't it just. Not so sure about some of the drone names though...
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