(July 2014)
This is a little off-the-radar, if reviews
in the Guardian and Independent can count as off-the-radar. What I suppose I
mean is that in the grubbier SFF corners of the web I occasionally inhabit this
has received absolutely no play whatsoever. Arguably writing a widely-read
and controversial (for want of a better word) article about old-school SF isn’t
the best way to ingratiate yourself into that little community, but your Tors
and your SF Signals don’t seem to have clocked to this at all. This is both a
surprise and a shame because The Country
of Ice Cream Star is a very special book indeed.
No child ever know a time be happiness until it gone. Time Pasha
come, when we still raiding in the Massa woods, I swore to worry. Yet this been
before the Nat Mass armies took no Massa child. Driver bell and vally still, he
rule and never weaken. We live wolfen through our wars
In a dystopian America where the entire
adult population has been wiped out by disease, bands of children have managed
to form a precarious and splintered peace in New England, living lives of
hunting, scavenging, and fighting occasional skirmishes with other tribes
(ranging from ritual posturing to full-on ‘murder war’). The narrator and
protagonist is Ice Cream Star of the Sengle tribe, who live in the Massa woods
alongside the pious Christenings, the inquisitive Lowells, and the debauched
slavers of the Nat Mass armies.
The world changing epidemic appears to be
some form of cancer, called ‘posies’ by the survivors, and it basically strikes
everyone over the age of twenty or so. And also everyone who isn’t black,
regardless of age. I don’t know how this would work as a real world pathology,
but as a device it leaves us with a world populated almost exclusively by black
kids who know they won’t make it much beyond their teens. This, of course, is
replete with all sorts of real-life resonances and opens up a huge range of other
thematic and narrative possibilities.
For example: it’s never entirely clear how
long after the epidemic the story occurs, but generations have clearly passed,
certainly long enough for tribal traditions and customs to become well
established and for the patois the characters speak to have evolved beyond the
AAVE on which it’s clearly based. But then, when a ‘generation’ is barely two
decades, how does that affect societal change? Does it speed it up or slow it
down? Retaining cultural knowledge clearly becomes an issue, and if every child
is likely to be without parents by their sixth birthday then how does a society
of orphans structure itself? It’s impossible not to acknowledge Lord of the Flies while discussing how
the various tribes who inhabit the Massa woods adapt to these conditions, and, pace Hobbes, we’re well into the realms
of the nasty, brutish, and short.
So initially the book trips along very
nicely as a standard, if exceptionally well done, dystopia, with all the attendant
room for social commentary and thematic exploration of human nature that
implies. And then, about a third of the way through, the plot and setting take
a hard right turn and we ain’t in Massa any more, Toto. Ice Cream gets
installed, a touch improbably, as a living god in the remnants of New York City
and the story takes on a very different character. To be honest the opening
sections of this second act were a bit of a downer, as a whole new set of characters,
social structures, and internecine politics get established and played out. This
has the unfortunate side-effect of robbing Ice Cream of a large degree of her
agency as she becomes just another piece on the board.
However, after a couple of chapters of this
a subtle recalibration took place in my generic expectations. In terms of plot,
at least, this isn’t really dystopian SF, and it certainly isn’t YA*. No, at
heart this is Epic Fantasy, or at the very least Heroic. It’s long enough that
it might qualify on size alone, but we also have: a young protagonist on a
quest into to save her people by stealing a macguffin from an evil unknown; a
supporting cast of characters each with their own uniquely useful talents (the
warrior, the diplomat, the spy); lengthy journeys across the land; factions of
shifting allegiance who help or hinder as they may; armies of darkness (though
that at least is nicely subverted) massing on the borders of the known world
ready to invade; forbidden love; honour; betrayal; sacrifice; and a grand climactic
battle of the allied forces of good against the monolithic hordes of evil. Once
you realize that this is what’s going on then the story starts to read quite
differently, and what initially threatened to be relatively tedious second and
third acts start to race by; it all makes much more sense if you view the roos
as orcs and Quantico as Minas Tirath.
And then it ends. In a manner which is
distinctly unepic and unheroic. I’m going to riff on this a bit now and try not
to give too much away, but I’ll drop in a couple of quotes to act as spoiler
buffers just in case you want to know absolutely nothing. Come back after the
second for the pat summary, if you will.
Mamadou watch on this with face besweaten. He skinny from his
sickness, and his face look skullish dread. He look like he belong to this hell
underworld. Can see he known what he will find; he seen this in his hated
dreams, these days. And he stand there with his starven looks, the king of
these red children. The king of flies and murder.
So after working out the Epic Fantasy angle
I was feeling really rather pleased with myself, right up until the finish. I
was also greatly enjoying how the text was subverting more traditional ‘kids
gone wild’ stories such as, yes, Lord of
the Flies, especially with regards to notions of maturity and authority. And
then the ending comes and I have to reassess both those views. It’s both
jarringly abrupt and agonizingly frustrating, but, it should be noted, neither
of those things are the same as ‘bad’.
Quite apart from all the other stuff going
on, Ice Cream is a protagonist capable of propelling an entire novel through
sheer force of personality alone. While she’s only fifteen, in the terms of the
story that’s basically middle-aged, so this combined with her strength of character means it’s
very easy to forget that she is still a teenager. Certainly she makes good and
bad choices, and cons and gets conned herself throughout the rest of the story,
but all that occurs amongst her peers; it’s only at the end that she has to try
and match wits with actual adults and then it becomes terribly, painfully
obvious that she’s totally out of her depth; that for all her pride and vigour
she’s still a child, vulnerable to the corruption and predations of older, more
cynical, more jaded minds. I really hope there’s a sequel in the works, not
just because I want to read more, but because if that’s how her story ends,
well…
Their Mary call Maria, and catolico Maria go from unfuck birth to
all adventures.
Welcome back, spoilerphobes. I should, I guess, mention a bit about the
characters and the language at some point before I finish. Those quotes above
are entirely representative of the style of the book; certain factions Ice
Cream meets later on speak in a more ‘standard’ form of English, but the rest
is narrated in her native patois. Writing stuff like this takes a huge amount
of commitment and talent to do well because missteps stand out even more than normal, and
it says great things for Newman’s skill that in a book of this length I
only noticed a couple of duff notes. Far, far more often the effect was one I’m
obliged to refer to as ‘lyrical’; when you rip words from their more
conventional bases you give them freedom as aesthetic objects beyond their more
prosaic function as signifiers, so when it’s done well, as it definitely is
here, what you end up with is words as music. Some passages are just
breathtaking:
Yo Radio hop over to the windowsill. There she arch and say her
yorry miaow. Behind her in the window go the river through the tumbledown
bridge. River slip around the beams, the metal splay and twisten. I watch the
blackish bluish brownish water till my spirit settle. Radio sit in my view and
lick her rosy pawpad.
And finally we have Ice Cream herself, who’s
a hugely compelling character. Prideful, earthy, honest, brim full of piss and
vinegar, and just simply fierce: once
she’s under your skin you have no trouble in understanding why she inspires so
much love and jealousy in those close to her. While I’m definitely not a fan of
the ending of The Country of Ice Cream
Star, the preceding 600 pages contain a combination of quality ideas,
characters, and writing the likes of which I’ve not read in a good long while.
It’s not an easy book, It’s not a pleasant or unproblematic book. It is,
however, a very, very good one indeed. Be
bone.
*There’s really nothing that qualifies it for that label apart from the main
characters’ ages.
May put this on my list. For effective use of patois if nothing else. You and I sharing much the same experience and meta-cognition on language I can see having the interest, but you have to wonder how many readers have the patience, or the literacy...
ReplyDeleteYou should read "Beasts of No Nation" by Uzodinma Iweala, who, besides writing entirely in a West African based English patois, makes a compelling character of a child soldier who commits the crimes of a war criminal. Think "Blood Meridian" in West Africa with child soldiers, except there's a redemption, and not cheap. I hate the book a little, because the writer's simply better than I could be, and he's a medical doctor (the fact he has a sociology degree takes some of the edge off my awe).
Now that sounds very interesting, and I see that it's fairly short as well. Think I'll definitely have a look at that, but it sounds like I might have to pick the right time for. Doesn't exactly sound like comfort reading...
ReplyDeleteI have to admire the books you take on. I haven't the fortitude right now for stuff like this or the Attic Buddha one. More's the pity I suppose.
ReplyDeleteOff to check out her article now.
Yep, loins were girded before I started this, for sure. The Buddha in the Attic is barely 200 pages though, so that's easier (in terms of length, if nothing else). I really can't recommend that one highly enough.
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